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Cycling scenic route

uphill thighs burn
caught in jagged breath tunnel -
eyes squint, mouth gape.

down whoosh chicory
veined pink maple keys cluster
cathedral arched boughs

One Deep Breath Prompt: Week 10, the Scenic Route

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7 Responses

  1. love the first one for it’s strength and will and the second for it’s beauty. Thanks for sharing, Jennifer (life’s snapshots)

    AnonymousAugust 11, 2006 @ 3:47 am
  2. Good haiku

    I particularly like the second one, very descriptive.
    Crafty Green Poet

    AnonymousAugust 11, 2006 @ 6:56 am
  3. These were fun and showed the love of cycling…cool!

    The Daily Warrior

    AnonymousAugust 11, 2006 @ 2:19 pm
  4. I love riding a bike and these haiku capture the experience beautifully! – Tara @ Paris Parfait

    AnonymousAugust 11, 2006 @ 3:48 pm
  5. Great Poem!

    Good job. A rather authentic vision of cycling! Thanks for sharing that one.

    Michele sent me!

    AnonymousAugust 12, 2006 @ 3:29 pm
  6. Your first stance certain made me cringe! Very effective!
    -Willow Grace

    AnonymousAugust 12, 2006 @ 4:23 pm
  7. Both the poem and the photo are incredibly rich. Well done. (from Paris Parfait)

    AnonymousDecember 4, 2006 @ 10:12 pm



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