At One Deep Breath the week’s prompt is solitude, or more specifically, wabi-sabi which has many interpretations in Western culture. In general, the meaning implies beauty in imperfection, impermanance, and incompleteness. It also infers a sense of solitude.
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look down at the sky
on the ground, the city,
unreachable lights
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Lovely haiku – the idea of looking down at the sky is engaging.
Clare
love this one, your poems are always so interesting and unique. -Jennifer (life’s snapshots)
Look down at the sky
Wow! This is deep! For me, I think it urges me to look down into myself to see everything (the universe).