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metal sculpture
finish, coarsened by rust,
catches snow

Weathered Prompt from One Deep Breath.

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4 Responses

  1. Very visual

    This is a very visual haiku, seasonal too!

    Crafty Green Poet

    AnonymousDecember 29, 2006 @ 9:11 am
  2. weathered

    I like this one a lot!
    And love that cobalt!

    Sandy from gardenpath

    AnonymousDecember 29, 2006 @ 12:06 pm
  3. from Roswila

    I like this one a lot. Thanks for the heads-up on the “haiku primer.” Looks really good, IMHO.

    AnonymousDecember 29, 2006 @ 6:06 pm
  4. wonderful!

    What a wonderful haiku. I don’t need a photo–the poem provides a window to the scene. Amazing.

    AnonymousDecember 30, 2006 @ 1:00 pm

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