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squint down alleys thick with
scuffed dust bunnies
convention let out

Not a haiku but a shortie one breath long.

More responses to the One Deep Breath Twilight Dusk prompts.

Visual poetry generator toy might be fun to play with some time.

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  1. Dusk

    Oh – the picture you paint … I have been there and my mind recognizes your words!


    AnonymousFebruary 10, 2007 @ 7:07 pm
  2. Andrew

    so much can be said in so little words :)

    AnonymousFebruary 10, 2007 @ 10:42 pm

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