The idea of randomizing Lampman more has happened. I threw a cover on the bed and the new sonnet with different set of rhymes made their individual word way to the floor. Before recording what I had. That’s the way the poem crumbles. So, what have we here upside down and following paths of chaos?
Was red the swift night and a song
sound might
sunny heard
stirred a knowing echoing
and could
heard sunny
retained
weight two
all but listening
shadow light mouth
ever maker of
not sad
Related posts:
- Playing with Archibald Lampman (II) I took Love-Doubt of Lampman and I asked myself I wonder if I could rearrange this and keep it a sonnet? and set the challenge to use only the words...
- Playing with Archibald Lampman Rewriting is a form of reading. While reading Archibald Lampman’s A Gift From the Sun I came across Love-Doubt. It was written over a century ago. This romantic sonnet is...
- Lover Night Disconcerted Soulless is all humanity to me To-night. My keenest longing is to be Alone, alone with God’s grey earth that seems Pulse of my pulse and consort of my...
works
oooh fun