Compare and Contrast is the theme challenge of the week at One Deep Breath
platitudes
whitewashed words
picket senses, locked
and Fibonacci sequence (1/1/2/3/5/8)
rain
on
ridges
blackberry
alveolar ridge
winter forgot these sensations
and a short poem,
concentration: first sonnets
tongue tips stuck out.
I watch iambs being led
to slaughter.
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from Patricia (a/k/a Roswila)
Really like that hay(na)ku. I’ve seen that form only a couple of times before and this time went “googling.” Have you ever tried it in link form? Phew, intriguing.
The images in the second poem are delightful.
And the pun in that last gave me quite a chuckle.
Nice work!
I
really liked
the first one
Crafty Green Poet
‘picket senses, locked’ was my favourite line.
Compare
Your sense of humor is superb. I’m really fond of fibonaccis but the haynaku could be a new fave. These three forms are wonderful – the perfect word on each line. http://firsttumblewords.blogspot.com